Monday, January 24, 2011

NEW CHARACTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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When I awoke I felt a cold floor. I sat up and looked around. We appeared to be in some sort of cell. My friends were unconscious on the floor. Then I noticed, sitting in the corner, a very thin macaw wearing an old tattered shirt and pants. "So been captured have you",he asked. Slightly alarmed, for he had looked deeply asleep, I answered him." Yes we have, but may I ask who are you?'' " I'm Raltalon Razkiban Malshi, captured prince of the kingdom of Harlarm. I am hatching a plan to escape, would you like to come with me?" At my astonished look he added "You want to escape, correct?" Around me I noticed my friends waking up. This was going to be fun... (two months later) The day was finally here! I woke up, excited but nervous. Just before breakfast was delivered we discussed the plan. Wings hid behind the old crate in our cell armed with a chunk of wood. Every detail discussed, every loophole filled, every problem solved. All that remained was the real deal...

What is the plan? find out next time! Also only one person comments (thank you) but my friend has a blog and gets millions of comments so it's not impossible. You can do it to! Go go go! (I hope I'm not being rude)

5 comments:

  1. Maybe the lemur will save you! Bring back the lemur!

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  2. I like the name of the macaw! I can't wait to hear about the Great Escape plan.

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  3. I just joined as a follower and I am catching up on what happened so far.
    This is an exciting story - can't wait to hear what happens next.

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  4. Hey great post can't wait to find out what happens

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