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When I awoke I felt a cold floor. I sat up and looked around. We appeared to be in some sort of cell. My friends were unconscious on the floor. Then I noticed, sitting in the corner, a very thin macaw wearing an old tattered shirt and pants. "So been captured have you",he asked. Slightly alarmed, for he had looked deeply asleep, I answered him." Yes we have, but may I ask who are you?'' " I'm Raltalon Razkiban Malshi, captured prince of the kingdom of Harlarm. I am hatching a plan to escape, would you like to come with me?" At my astonished look he added "You want to escape, correct?" Around me I noticed my friends waking up. This was going to be fun... (two months later) The day was finally here! I woke up, excited but nervous. Just before breakfast was delivered we discussed the plan. Wings hid behind the old crate in our cell armed with a chunk of wood. Every detail discussed, every loophole filled, every problem solved. All that remained was the real deal...
What is the plan? find out next time! Also only one person comments (thank you) but my friend has a blog and gets millions of comments so it's not impossible. You can do it to! Go go go! (I hope I'm not being rude)
Monday, January 24, 2011
Monday, January 3, 2011
So Close and Yet so Far

Happy 2011! Just to tell you the last part of the story was a small mistake and we'll continue pretending it never happened.
From what I could see of the fedrals they seemed to be led by a big one whose coat was a foxy brown with brown and black patches scattered along the scruffily furred body. The others were a motley mixture of all colors and sizes. They were wearing camo clothes. Then Gilbaro pointed to the big one. I gasped, around his neck there was a big blue gem! " Take im tew ther dudgons" said the big one. We were roughly bound and all of a sudden I saw a humongous pole , then stars, then blackness.
What just happened? Find out next time!
Thursday, December 16, 2010
To The West
We wish you a merry Christmas, we wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new post!
We packed up and headed west, Redoston in hand. After a few days we came to a place known as Ostomatopia river. Wings, who knew her waterways jumped up shouting ''The Ostomatopia leads to Gwineibav lake! That must be it!" We set off running. Suddenly the ground seemed to disappear beneath us, screaming, we fell into the pit. "Well well leek what we have here"an evil voice cackled. Six fedrals (small cats I made up) looked into the pit. "Tie them well and geed." Then another voice spoke. "No, you jolly well don't you great big bullies, wot wot."
Who is it? What will happen? (hint: if you have read any Redwall books you can guess who the "wot wotter" is) But if you haven't wait and see!
We packed up and headed west, Redoston in hand. After a few days we came to a place known as Ostomatopia river. Wings, who knew her waterways jumped up shouting ''The Ostomatopia leads to Gwineibav lake! That must be it!" We set off running. Suddenly the ground seemed to disappear beneath us, screaming, we fell into the pit. "Well well leek what we have here"an evil voice cackled. Six fedrals (small cats I made up) looked into the pit. "Tie them well and geed." Then another voice spoke. "No, you jolly well don't you great big bullies, wot wot."
Who is it? What will happen? (hint: if you have read any Redwall books you can guess who the "wot wotter" is) But if you haven't wait and see!
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
Magic
I am very sorry that I haven't posted in a while.
Later that night the large lemur, who's name happened to be Tyshily came to fetch us. " Yubing redoston. Itbe naded fir daning stas. " She lead us into a large room at the top of a tower that was entirely blue. At the top Lutoma was waiting for us. The walls were entirely blue except for a golden band that ran along the walls with a small indentation at the front of the room. The golden whateveritwas hung in front of the doorway. As I watched lemurs stepped through it and as they did, a deep voice said their names. " Gerothy, Degi, Cealoi, Maelily" it spoke. "Step through " Gilbaro told me. I stepped through. I could feel the voice's excitement when it spoke. "Ah the holder of the redoston. I sense unknown animals behind you. Are they friend or foe?" "Friend" I told it. ''Good" it said. " Now let the dancing stars start!" it thundered. Everybody broke out into cheers. " Place the redoston in the stonhole and ask your question" it instructed. I did as told. All of a sudden the room quieted. "Where is bluoston?" I questioned. "Not a simple question. STARS GUIDE THE WAY! " it said. The plain blue walls had stars on them now. As everybody watched the constellation known as Gwineibrav glowed blue. "Gwineibrav is in the west" Jess told me. "I think that means to go west" She and Wings had been watching every thing, spellbound. "We will leave tomorrow" Gilbaro decided.
What will they find in the west? I don't know but I hope that you will find a happy thanksgiving tomorrow!
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Hello friends! Today I will NOT be writing about Onion but about a hotdog who wanted to turn pink. So here goes!
Once there was a hotdog who wanted to turn pink. His friend, Sausage said "I have map that leads to a place where there is pink goo. You can turn pink in it." So the two hopped off the vendor's cart and followed the map through big paths with things that tried to squash them from above until they reached a big wall that opened and closed. Quickly they dash through it just as it shuts. Inside, they find a huge bucket of pink goo. By standing on Sausage's sholders Hotdog jumps into the goo and turns pink. They live happily ever after.
THE END
Wow that's a weird story! But I like it!
Thursday, October 21, 2010
Dancing Stars
Ready?
After dinner Lutoma came into my room along with everyone else. Lutoma told us how she knew Garlic. "It was a long time ago" (these next sentences are flashbacks as Lutoma tells the story, L means what Lutoma said M is for Mommy, PG is for guard, G is for Garlic and GB is for Gilbaro. ). Rumble, rrumble,rrrumble. L"Wah! Mommy!" PG "This way!" (Tower crashes) PG ''Hurry!" (Lutoma stumbles Mommy grabs her) PG '' Over this log! Run! Quick!'' (Wall crumbles. A large chunk lands on Mommy who throws Lutoma away from the wall.) M ''Run!'' (1 hour later outside the ruined gates after the earthquake.) G ''What happened? GB "Earthquake. Can you do something?" ( G hums, everything rebuilds and goes back to its place). G '' Yes I can". (Right now. ) I was amazed at her story! Lutoma then said "Tonight is Dancing Stars. They will give you the next one's location."
After dinner Lutoma came into my room along with everyone else. Lutoma told us how she knew Garlic. "It was a long time ago" (these next sentences are flashbacks as Lutoma tells the story, L means what Lutoma said M is for Mommy, PG is for guard, G is for Garlic and GB is for Gilbaro. ). Rumble, rrumble,rrrumble. L"Wah! Mommy!" PG "This way!" (Tower crashes) PG ''Hurry!" (Lutoma stumbles Mommy grabs her) PG '' Over this log! Run! Quick!'' (Wall crumbles. A large chunk lands on Mommy who throws Lutoma away from the wall.) M ''Run!'' (1 hour later outside the ruined gates after the earthquake.) G ''What happened? GB "Earthquake. Can you do something?" ( G hums, everything rebuilds and goes back to its place). G '' Yes I can". (Right now. ) I was amazed at her story! Lutoma then said "Tonight is Dancing Stars. They will give you the next one's location."
Thursday, September 30, 2010
Second One
Let's launch into Onion!
I was so amazed I could only stare."Wha... how...''? Wings stammered. " Baro gave it to me to keep. But he said to give it to any of Garlic's family if I ever saw any of you." Lutoma told them. "Tanola!" she shouted. A slightly large jolly looking lemur appeared. "Tak tham tu dir roms." The other lemur beckoned them forwards. She talked as she lead us along a corridor. "Doyu bay eny Lumerese?'' she asked. Baro answered with a "Ino Lumerese theno litle Lumerese" She nodded and said "Dinbe at 6:30, yube lat yumis din. Thebee yu roms." She led us into a small room with doors on either side "Thesfor be yu roms" she told us and walked out into the corridor. Gilbaro translated everything for us and we headed down to dinner.
How does Lutoma know Garlic? Find out next time!
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